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intricately ordinary

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I am the wayward child,
subliminal and defeathered—
almost perfect.

What's that in your heart?
Myths and the things that really matter
like wallflower clippings,
unfiltered and restless.

Don't forget to let me go;
the keepers of my heart
are undedicated,
sleeping behind the wheel.
Heeey guys, I finally did one. A title poem! And guess what? Every one of these are pieces by the lovely and kind Maddie, aka *intricately-ordinary. Which is why the title is what it is.

I wanted to write this because she's a big inspiration of mine, and all her poetry have amazing titles that made this work so well. I hope you like this, Maddie dear, and thanks for always giving your breathtaking poetry titles that can make poems themselves. :XD:

Now go watch *intricately-ordinary. Do it. I commend thee. Now.

I need to stop writing poetry and focus on prose gaaaaah I'm so lazy

The titles I used are as follows:

I am the wayward child,
subliminal and defeathered,
almost perfect.

What's that in your heart?
Myths and the things that really matter
like wallflower clippings,
unfiltered and restless.

Don't forget to let me go;
the keepers of my heart
are undedicated,
sleeping behind the wheel.
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QuirkyCuriousBex's avatar
Good God, this is just perfect.

That's right, I said perfect.

You are awesome. :heart: