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I want to create an aromatic sea of jasmines
and stardust mountains of silver and —

No.

Inkblot skeletons with paper mache
hearts, whose bones shall burn with one glance at the
sun; gravestones of blood diamonds and tears of thistles...

Harp strings ringing in grotesque harmony, screaming
for slender fingers to pluck and caress with devotion.

I want to write

    gods


and

    chaos.
I'll cease with spamming you all with dumb and worthless writing this week, now.

This actually has a deeper meaning.

I'll just keep that to myself.

New styles are fun to play around with.

Why did this make the front page. I don't get it.

Well...I edited the format a bit, because it made it flow better in my eyes...yeah....
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Erin-Watson Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Just completely awesome, x
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epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I think I have an idea what this poem means. Or maybe that's just my own opinion. This. This is deep. That's what I'll say for now. Excuse me while I go sit somewhere in awe over the beauty of your poetry. I'm so glad to be one of your watchers. :happycry:
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aha, thank you so much.
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epicbleachfan998 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
You're very welcome~! :huggle:
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
... I hope I'm not the only one who see the brilliance in this piece, am I?

Love the format! The writing, as usual, is deep, metaphoric, and completely you!
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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:iconmauvaiseloup:
Mauvaiseloup Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Dude, your poetry...! This is awesome!
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ehe, thanks.
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Celestrai Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This seems to be about putting on a beautiful facade (the writing about seas of jasmines) to hide your truer desires/self.
I could be wrong.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps... :)
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ShinaNyan Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
._. Why can't I express my feelings into words right now?....

Well, *tears up* that was.... Beautiful? Meaningful? Grea- ah, heck! YOU MADE ME CRY WITH 63 WORDS!!!

NEW RECORD, MY FRIEND!!!! :iconhappytearsplz:
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But it's not supposed to be tear-inducing! D:
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ShinaNyan Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
It isn't!? Well, urm. I... IJustFinishedReadingAGermanyReaderInsertAndHeWantToKillYouBlahBlahBlahHeThenWantToKillYourSonsItsCalledDominationAndItsScaryPrussiaIsAwesomeLikeAlways....

._. Your epic....
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Kaye00 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I don't know, but it's not the imagery that catches me here. The imagery just seems to be posed to clash against one another and show two facets of what the writer could write about to me. The rest is what catches me. It makes it seem as if the writer deeply wants to write of something, but is unable to, or perhaps that they're caught between writing two things like the imagery might imply. I'm not sure, entirely, but it certainly is interesting to pick at.
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're pretty damn close, actually.
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:iconkaye00:
Kaye00 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha, that makes me curious as to what the actual meaning is. XD
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Ag-Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I don't usually read the literature, but I glanced at this on the front page and it just grabbed me.
YOU ARE REALLY FUNKING GOOD. I read a couple of your other things too, you are amazing!
K, just wanted you to know! :onfire:
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...it made the front page WHAT.

...holy shit.

Well, thank you very much!!!
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Ag-Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
:iconraisayplz: And I'm very glad it did.
You're welcome. X3
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CrazyCharlette1415 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The mental images.

Excuse me while I process the beauty of them.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can have these moments every so often.
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CassielFaded Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
This is dark. I love how you went from beautiful to savage.I'm just describing how it made me feel =)
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I just wrote, really...
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RainbowCat312 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
:iconleftangelwingplz::iconrightangelwingplz:
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...that looks like the wings are having an epilepsy.
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RainbowCat312 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Writer
:iconleftangelwingplz::iconrightangelwingplz
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kiraloverless Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
sounds like death note.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Never got into that series...
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LittleMissChess Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Gahhh such beautiful descriptions and imagery. :love:
Screw jasmines and stardust! I prefer thistle tears and inkblot skeletons >: )
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
But jasmines smell good. :meow:

Haha, thank you so much!
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LittleMissChess Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Hmm... You've got a point there...
You're welcome! :)
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imagination-junkie Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
ERMAHGERD THAT IMAGERY.

"Inkblot skeletons with paper mache hearts" FUCK that's brilliant.

And way to be ambitious :D
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really? It's that brilliant? ^^; Thanks...!
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imagination-junkie Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
It absolutely is :D
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Mandi7MM Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Photographer
Oh my, this is.. this is.... AMAZING! :jawdrop: :love: :heart:
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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Mandi7MM Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Photographer
You're Welcome! :D
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DompteurLoup Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Gods and chaos tend to go hand-in-hand.

I like the dark implications, and how the first statement is stopped before becoming too... warm. Wish I could hear that harp played bye those skeletal hands..
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The imagery.

It overwhelms me in beautiful, intoxicating waves.

Welp.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So it's like noxious gas.
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:iconvienna-kangaroo:
vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Only better.
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10kdays Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful and haunting, I love the first paragraph and the line "harp strings ringing in grotesque harmony"; gives such vivid images! Great job :)
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the compliment! I try to, well, create...abstract imagery, I suppose.
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10kdays Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome, I'm sure you do :D
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junete Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
It's beautiful and I love your username.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you so much! :heart:
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junete Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
You're welcome :heart:
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013
Wow! I love it!
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