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Sun girl,

the whispering stars
& feathered clouds dance
for you tonight.

Do not let anyone
clip your wings;

you were made for the skies.
{I want to soar.}

This can be taken in two ways:

My love for being on a plane and staring out the window or something else. Either way, I wrote something, so I'm going to go back to attempting to recover from jetlag.
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:iconirphotogirl:
IRphotogirl Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Student Photographer
:thumbsup::rose:
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:iconlilyhellsing:
LilyHellsing Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Oh the font is just perfect for that. :)
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Rieal-Dragonsbane Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Uplifting. :)
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on the DLD feature on such a lovely poem ! : hug:
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
JUST GONNA STAND HERE AND WATCH ME DERP

Because I got another DLD and I don't know what to doooo.
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   Writer
lol okay :XD:
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:iconssensory:
ssensory Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here dailylitdeviations.deviantart..... Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh, thank you so much! <3
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:iconmistresscthulhu:
MistressCthulhu Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
very short yet moving, nice one
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks <3
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:iconmuzykluvr:
Muzykluvr Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Very nice. : )
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:iconhiddenshadowspirit:
HiddenShadowSpirit Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful.
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:iconcitizen17:
citizen17 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the mood of this.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear so :)
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Sunjinjo Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aaand this was made for my faves. Straight to my core, wonderful job. :D
I think you captured your plane feelings really well, it was a good idea to write it down as the feeling was fresh. Gah, I want to fly again, the feeling of ascension really has no equal.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
asdfgh thank you so much ;_;
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:iconwest-117:
West-117 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
I'm going to start by saying I like the font. It lends an interesting feeling to the poem. Then come the words which are nothing short of gorgeous. I love how this can be interpreted by the reader to find their own meaning
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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:iconkushamisaru:
kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YOU MUST TEACH ME YOUR METHODS. I require your way with words.

It's beautiful, isn't it? The sight outside the window of a plane in flight. Did you get to look out during the night too? I've heard you can see the planets the way we see the moon on the ground. It must be sooo... *sigh*

Ahem. Anyway, I think it goes without saying that I liked this piece.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I was kind of asleep when we flew at night ^^; I LOVE THE CLOUDS.

I don't know how to teach my methods cause I didn't even know I had any.
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, That figures ^^; to see that is on my bucket list though. AND THE CLOUDS I CAN'T EVEN :iconitssofluffyplz:

B-but the words... And the deviation D: (nah it's okay)
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worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The font plays lots in the tone of this. Is that Papyrus?
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yuuus it is.
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:iconworldpeaceismine:
worldpeaceismine Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very well done! ^^ I enjoyed it a lot!
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:iconthoughtstravelstars:
thoughtstravelstars Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this - it has a magical feeling to it.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks c:
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:iconintricately-ordinary:
intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YOU'RE BACK :iconlainloveplz:

and your words are beautiful as ever!
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you darling~
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dang you are oodles of good imagery! :love:

btw: can you list all the fonts you use/d, they're incredible!
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)

Uh...I normally don't remember...but this one is Papyrus. I know I've used one called GulimChe before. And of course the "< code >" one.
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Smile047 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So pretty... :)

And what's the font?
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Papyrus. :)
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:iconsmile047:
Smile047 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? It doesn't look like the Papyrus font that I have. Did it come with your computer or did you download it?
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It came with my computer.
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gawd.

Beautiful font.

Beautiful writing.

This was on the "eight-hours popular" front page. .-. I noticed it.
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thanks...and really? I uploaded it and then just kind of fell asleep. Jet lag is almost gone!
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Espada-Kitsuki Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Jet lag can be annoying... *buries face in pillow*

Yeah, it was up there. Just had to scroll down a bit.
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LayaAmaranthi Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful. And welcome back. :)
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Man I love planes, I know the feeling of jetlag. This is a great poem!
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I want a dragon so I can fly.
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:iconfindmyface:
findmyface Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Agreed.
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SECRET-NINJA-SUPER-M Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013   General Artist
It's lovely~

I like the font too.
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks very mucho.
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alisha987 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bloody hell, this is more than recovered o.o

i HAVE DECIDED TO STALK YOUR ACCOUNT BECAUSE OF THIS. BLESS YOUR BEAUTIFUL POETICNESS

(I just had alot of cake. Sorry in advance xD)
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:iconlupus-astra:
lupus-astra Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(I kinda came up with this on the plane, just edited it right now aha)

I like being stalked.

Carry on.
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